Thursday 28 March 2019

term 1 week 9

This is my Brunner Mine poem. We did this with having to use one of the poetry language features witch I used onomatopoeia and alliteration.
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  1. Unknown3 April 2019 at 14:38

    Hey Shilah! I like your use of onomatopoeia, Boom, Bang Bash! Its also alliteration with all those lovely B sounds. Great to see you blogging. Keep up the good work!

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  2. Unknown17 May 2019 at 09:52

    Sup Shilah,
    I like how you have used onomatopoeia in your learning, I also like how you have used alliteration.

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  3. Unknown28 August 2019 at 14:15

    Hi my name is Skylah and i'm in Mamaku 2
    I like your drawing and your exploding words . next time you could say why you did it.Did you visit the mine? was it fun to do from Skylah.

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